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I do not own Chris Pratt, The Lookout, or Joseph Gordon-Levitt. What this means is that I will most likely make mistakes in my portrayal of him. I do appreciate being told when I do so I can either fix them and/or learn how to avoid them in the future. This post is where you tell me. What helps me most is being pointed to a specific example of where I screwed up, so if you can do that while giving me crit, it's the best way for me to know where I've gone wrong.

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Sunday, June 10th, 2012 12:52 pm
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[There's nothing interesting going on here in this rather plain bedroom. Not too many posters, but there are labels on everything that describe actions like turn off the light, make the bed, turn off alarm. In addition to those labels, there's a young man whose alarm clock is blaring at the top of its mechanical lungs until he rolls over and slaps it into silence. He slowly drags himself out of bed, shirtless with a long scar running down from the nape of his neck across his shoulder and down his arm, and shuffles to the closest window, pushing the curtain aside to place his hand against the glass. He stands there for a moment as a confused frown forms on his face, only to shove the drapes back and come face to face with... space. The final frontier.

It's not what Chris Pratt expected. It's supposed to be Kansas City out there.

He hurries back to bed, knocking off knickknacks off his nighttable until he comes across a small notebook with a red cover. Chris flips through it once, twice, three, and then a fourth time, looking for something that isn't there. And in a fit of something that's a mixture of panic, fear, and frustration, he throws the notepad across the room and begins stomping towards the door.]


Where the fuck am I? Lewis? Lewis!